Stupid Language

September 24, 2013 11:07 pm

I just received an unsolicited email from an unknown saying “just thought how similar we are in our approach to problem solving…I am personally inviting you to join me in helping sales team all over Australia for a better Sales Improvement Process.” It was OK to this point.
“This is a once in a lifetime opportunity for me to make YOU the HERO just like Steve Jobs to your clients.”

If you want to sell your services don’t use stupid language